Hypothermic - B&B (w/some Ang) - Flangst - M – By Meegs Posted 17/12/2007 01:16:26 AM

I was just commenting on it occuring on the show and they probably wouldn't show it. As for what I said, I was just going on the information of the physician who taught my First Aid for the Professional Rescuer class told us. However, you have a well written story and so for what I know, I was quite willing to suspend disbelief. You have good characterizations and move the plot along well--all that any story could ask for. Sorry if my reply seemed like a personal criticism.

Oh no, I didn't think it was a personal criticism. I was just a little thrown 'cuz I had done all this research. I guess I just felt like I had to "prove" myself or something. Suppose that's the competitive part of me jumping out. I guess it's also because this is my favorite story of my own. But I didn't mean to jump on ya about it. Glad you liked reading it! And once again, welcome to the aby!