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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by ToZiKa Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:31 am
you want warm and mushy?riviera41797 wrote:this isn't making me feel all warm and mushy inside here....
write a warm and mushy chapter.......nothing warmer than that
oh and Rob TMI!!!
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by THX1138 Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:51 am
LOL! And here I thought I was sharing...ToZiKa wrote:you want warm and mushy?riviera41797 wrote:this isn't making me feel all warm and mushy inside here....
write a warm and mushy chapter.......nothing warmer than that
oh and Rob TMI!!!
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by DBCrazy Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:55 am
What's the name of this story again?? Oh yeah, that's right!
No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
Rivi, come back and play with us. We're just a little cranky because we didn't get our nap out, or we're stressing over company coming or the shopping's not done yet, or the decorations aren't all up yet.
No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
Rivi, come back and play with us. We're just a little cranky because we didn't get our nap out, or we're stressing over company coming or the shopping's not done yet, or the decorations aren't all up yet.
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by ToZiKa Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:56 am
DBCrazy wrote:What's the name of this story again?? Oh yeah, that's right!
No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
Rivi, come back and play with us. We're just a little cranky because we didn't get our nap out, or we're stressing over company coming or the shopping's not done yet, or the decorations aren't all up yet.
I have a cold
does that count for something?
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by ToZiKa Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:57 am
THX1138 wrote:LOL! And here I thought I was sharing...ToZiKa wrote:you want warm and mushy?riviera41797 wrote:this isn't making me feel all warm and mushy inside here....
write a warm and mushy chapter.......nothing warmer than that
oh and Rob TMI!!!
well you were sharing.....maybe a little too much though......
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by DBCrazy Thu Dec 10, 2009 3:09 am
I've been known to be cranky when I have a cold, so yes, I guess so.ToZiKa wrote:DBCrazy wrote:What's the name of this story again?? Oh yeah, that's right!
No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
Rivi, come back and play with us. We're just a little cranky because we didn't get our nap out, or we're stressing over company coming or the shopping's not done yet, or the decorations aren't all up yet.
I have a cold
does that count for something?
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by THX1138 Thu Dec 10, 2009 5:38 am
And though it pains me to know end to feed that ugly stereotype, like many men I get cranky and petulant when I'm feeling sick. Like this one time I had a rash, right? And they gave me this cream...wait, would that be over sharing again? Nm, I'll let it go to be on the save side. Anyway it totally counts ToZ.DBCrazy wrote:I've been known to be cranky when I have a cold, so yes, I guess so.ToZiKa wrote:DBCrazy wrote:What's the name of this story again?? Oh yeah, that's right!
No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
Rivi, come back and play with us. We're just a little cranky because we didn't get our nap out, or we're stressing over company coming or the shopping's not done yet, or the decorations aren't all up yet.
I have a cold
does that count for something?
RM
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by dawnsfire Thu Dec 10, 2009 11:29 am
AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
You have no idea how I had to psych myself up just to read this tonight--and what do I get?
More. Quick. Soon. Now would be nice!
Please?
But...talk about getting your prayers answered, right?
You have no idea how I had to psych myself up just to read this tonight--and what do I get?
More. Quick. Soon. Now would be nice! Please?
But...talk about getting your prayers answered, right?
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by saraluvzbonz Fri Dec 11, 2009 1:57 am
You know, Riv, the comments are pretty entertaining. Hold out for a few hours after each chapter? 
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by ToZiKa Fri Dec 11, 2009 4:08 am
don't encourage her!saraluvzbonz wrote:You know, Riv, the comments are pretty entertaining. Hold out for a few hours after each chapter?
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by riviera41797 Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:12 am
the next chapter is gonna be the big one. Promise.
May or may not write it today.
May or may not write it today.
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by THX1138 Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:23 am
Would begging help? I'm not above begging, just let me find someone to do it for me...
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by saraluvzbonz Fri Dec 11, 2009 6:15 am
Sorry, it's just that you were all so amusing I didn't want the fun to end.
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by ToZiKa Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:00 am
we weren't amsuing.....we were desperate
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by carebear Sun Dec 13, 2009 2:00 am
Oh no chapter yet awwww come out come out wherever you are 
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by riviera41797 Sun Dec 13, 2009 2:01 am
I'm here.
Gonna write it today or tomorrow afternoon.
Gonna write it today or tomorrow afternoon.
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by ToZiKa Sun Dec 13, 2009 5:38 am
riviera41797 wrote:I'm here.
Gonna write it today or tomorrow afternoon.
oh that was evil.....I thought it was a new chapter......and all I got was an 'I'm here'......but better than nothing
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by riviera41797 Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:12 am
A/N: many thanks to the ones who took the time to review and let me know their thoughts. Hope you enjoy! – Riviera41797
Chapter 11
Brennan entered her apartment, closed and locked the door behind her and let out a sigh of relief, leaning against the door, tilting her head back with her eyes closed a moment.
She carelessly tossed her bag and jacket on the couch; she’d worry about unpacking later. Right now, all she wanted was a nice, hot shower, then some sleep in her nice, warm bed.
While the work she did was rewarding and was important, she was more than glad to be home. Brennan felt ready to face Booth, and needed to talk to him about that line he’d drawn, and how these new feelings she had made her want to consider moving past that line.
Perhaps.
She was also eager to get back to work at the Jeffersonian. She’d come to miss Angela, Hodgins, Cam and the interns. She also wanted to check on Sarah and Maria, to see how they were faring in the new life they’d began.
Stopping, she frowned, and glanced around her home. Something seemed off. The room had a certain…lived in aroma to it, almost as if someone had been here, among her things. Looking around, everything seemed in order.
Realization dawned on her. Booth. Of course. She’d asked him to come by and collect her mail, check her messages. Smiling at herself and shaking her head, for forgetting such a triviality, she made her way to her bathroom.
Quickly shedding her clothes, she turned the hot water on as high as she could tolerate, she stepped into the watery spray. It had been so long since she’d had a nice, hot shower. The living arrangements and bathing accommodations where she’d been staying were very primitive. This felt almost luxurious.
Using her favorite scented body wash, she generously lathered her body with the soapy fragrance.
After taking her time with all her neglected toiletries, she wrapped herself in a fluffy bath towel, ignoring the pile of shed clothing, and padded to her bedroom. Brennan glanced out the windows. It was completely dark out now.
Allowing her towel to pool at her feet, she sighed as she slid beneath the sheets of her oversized sized bed. It felt like it had been forever since she’d been on such a soft, comfortable surface.
As she drifted off to sleep, the thought crossed her mind that something seemed off somehow, but fatigue overwhelmed her and before she could weigh and consider the meaning behind the thought, she was asleep.
Bright light filtered through the sheer panels that encased the windows, and illuminated the room, awakening Booth from his deep slumber. Lying in bed with his eyes closed, he let the warmth wash over him. It had been a long time since he’d slept that sound, or for that long.
Praying seemed to sooth his soul. Maybe now he could face the life he had to live without her. Maybe now he had the courage, the strength.
Rolling over and opening his eyes, he inhaled sharply, for right there, next to him, was his Bones. He had to be dreaming, there was no chance that this was real. Maybe he’d slipped back into his coma, where he wanted to be.
Her face was calm and relaxed, her cheeks slightly flushed, her lips parted as she her breath came in and out. Dark lashes rested on her cheeks. The blankets were up just to the top of her chest, suggesting she wore nothing beneath the comforter.
Afraid to break the spell, tears gathered in the corners of his eyes, and tracked silently down his cheeks. Unable to restrain himself, he reached out, and brushed a strand of hair that was resting across her forehead. It was so soft, and her scent enveloped him.
This had to be the most realistic dream he’d ever had. It was like he could really smell her scent, feel the softness of her hair. He wanted to enjoy every minute of it, as it was obviously God’s way of answering his prayer.
Then, as he watched, her eyes opened, and met his. The beautiful cerulean eyes gazed into his a moment, her brow furrowed, confused, and after a long pause, she said hoarsely:
“Booth?”
End this chapter
A/N: I know you guys all wanted the confrontational, what the hell is going on scene, but that is gonna be next. Again, thanks for reading!
Chapter 11
Brennan entered her apartment, closed and locked the door behind her and let out a sigh of relief, leaning against the door, tilting her head back with her eyes closed a moment.
She carelessly tossed her bag and jacket on the couch; she’d worry about unpacking later. Right now, all she wanted was a nice, hot shower, then some sleep in her nice, warm bed.
While the work she did was rewarding and was important, she was more than glad to be home. Brennan felt ready to face Booth, and needed to talk to him about that line he’d drawn, and how these new feelings she had made her want to consider moving past that line.
Perhaps.
She was also eager to get back to work at the Jeffersonian. She’d come to miss Angela, Hodgins, Cam and the interns. She also wanted to check on Sarah and Maria, to see how they were faring in the new life they’d began.
Stopping, she frowned, and glanced around her home. Something seemed off. The room had a certain…lived in aroma to it, almost as if someone had been here, among her things. Looking around, everything seemed in order.
Realization dawned on her. Booth. Of course. She’d asked him to come by and collect her mail, check her messages. Smiling at herself and shaking her head, for forgetting such a triviality, she made her way to her bathroom.
Quickly shedding her clothes, she turned the hot water on as high as she could tolerate, she stepped into the watery spray. It had been so long since she’d had a nice, hot shower. The living arrangements and bathing accommodations where she’d been staying were very primitive. This felt almost luxurious.
Using her favorite scented body wash, she generously lathered her body with the soapy fragrance.
After taking her time with all her neglected toiletries, she wrapped herself in a fluffy bath towel, ignoring the pile of shed clothing, and padded to her bedroom. Brennan glanced out the windows. It was completely dark out now.
Allowing her towel to pool at her feet, she sighed as she slid beneath the sheets of her oversized sized bed. It felt like it had been forever since she’d been on such a soft, comfortable surface.
As she drifted off to sleep, the thought crossed her mind that something seemed off somehow, but fatigue overwhelmed her and before she could weigh and consider the meaning behind the thought, she was asleep.
Bright light filtered through the sheer panels that encased the windows, and illuminated the room, awakening Booth from his deep slumber. Lying in bed with his eyes closed, he let the warmth wash over him. It had been a long time since he’d slept that sound, or for that long.
Praying seemed to sooth his soul. Maybe now he could face the life he had to live without her. Maybe now he had the courage, the strength.
Rolling over and opening his eyes, he inhaled sharply, for right there, next to him, was his Bones. He had to be dreaming, there was no chance that this was real. Maybe he’d slipped back into his coma, where he wanted to be.
Her face was calm and relaxed, her cheeks slightly flushed, her lips parted as she her breath came in and out. Dark lashes rested on her cheeks. The blankets were up just to the top of her chest, suggesting she wore nothing beneath the comforter.
Afraid to break the spell, tears gathered in the corners of his eyes, and tracked silently down his cheeks. Unable to restrain himself, he reached out, and brushed a strand of hair that was resting across her forehead. It was so soft, and her scent enveloped him.
This had to be the most realistic dream he’d ever had. It was like he could really smell her scent, feel the softness of her hair. He wanted to enjoy every minute of it, as it was obviously God’s way of answering his prayer.
Then, as he watched, her eyes opened, and met his. The beautiful cerulean eyes gazed into his a moment, her brow furrowed, confused, and after a long pause, she said hoarsely:
“Booth?”
End this chapter
A/N: I know you guys all wanted the confrontational, what the hell is going on scene, but that is gonna be next. Again, thanks for reading!
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by ToZiKa Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:22 am
This was really unexpected.
I was waiting for her to see him, or for him to turn on the light when she shed the towel or maybe even for her jumping right out of bed again......but I did not expect them to just sleep peacefully next to each other.
Can't wait for more!
I was waiting for her to see him, or for him to turn on the light when she shed the towel or maybe even for her jumping right out of bed again......but I did not expect them to just sleep peacefully next to each other.
Can't wait for more!
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by newhaven5 Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:55 am
Can't wait for the next update!
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by carebear Mon Dec 14, 2009 10:20 am
aww very nice way to wake up I do believe. Cant wait for the next chapter
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by Bonesbabe Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:18 pm
wonderful! plz update soon....
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Re: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
by DBCrazy Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:20 am
All I can say is that must be one mighty big bed for neither one of them to realize they're not in it alone. That, and Booth's prayer,
Can't wait for the next chapter, Rivi!
I'm holding you to making Booth keep his promise to God!"Bring her back to me, please. I promise, I’ll do things different this time, I won’t let fear hold me back."
Can't wait for the next chapter, Rivi!
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