Re: Just A Dance - M- Eh.. heated fluff? I dunno. Details inside!

by ehbee Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:55 am

You rock, that was so amazingly hot, steamy. I don't know why you think you can't write smut, because you can and do. It is tasteful and oh......soo.........soo......hot. Great job.

otismotis

by ehbee Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:56 am

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!THEY FINALLY TOOK OFF THEIR CLOTHES AND DID IT........whoooooo hoooooooo wow kiki.......that fucking rocked.......that was absolutely fucking brilliant...........sexy and soooooooo freakin hot......holy shit girl..........you are amazing........glad space gave me four buckets of ice for this one..........

by ehbee Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:56 am

kiki that was fucking amazing...hmmm*can't write smut....my arse* that was brilliant
ihave to say this line..

"allowing her fingertips to shimmy down under the fabric and graze his balls."

made me smirk uncontrollably....

and

"trying and failing to get her fingers to meet around the circumference."

god damn woman, i never actually imagined him to be THIS big...wow!!!!!!

magicstar

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