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Post by carebear Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:40 am

I am waiting oh so waiting fo this third date no pressure just sitting here swinging my legs nothing to do but finish this paper and start a final but um post more soon please please please Smile
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Post by THX1138 Tue Dec 08, 2009 9:05 am

TempestJo wrote:LOL. I don't know about schnitzel, but it would work on hot dogs. Bratwurst.. Cannoli.... tootsie pops...

Good luck with it!
Hmm, Cannoli definitely works what with the cream filling and all.

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Post by TempestJo Wed Dec 09, 2009 2:50 am

Brennan picked at her cotton candy. “It’s sticky.”

“Yeah, isn’t it great?” Booth replied, his mouth full of hot dog.

She pulled off a clump and put it in her mouth. “It melts!”

Booth nodded vigorously and took a long drink of his pop, before grinning at her. “Do you like it though?”

“Aside from the fact that it has absolutely no nutritional value… It’s quite good.”

He leaned over and pressed his mouth to hers, sliding his tongue into her mouth quickly before sitting straight and licking his lips. “Yeah, it is.”

She frowned. “You, however taste of hot dogs.”

He winked and stood up, offering her his hand. “Ready for the next ride?”

“Not the upside down one please.”

“Ok, how about the loop one?”

She nodded, carefully eating more cotton candy as they walked.

“So… Sleep good last night?” He asked casually.

She shrugged. “I had the nightmare again.”

“Yeah?”

She nodded, focusing on the horizon. “It was different though.”

“How so?”

“You were there.”

“Really?”

“Yes. You found me.”

“Were you still dead?”

“Of course, I was in the stove with an enormous hole in my skull.”

He paused, grabbing her arm.

She looked up at him, confused. “What?”

“So I didn’t find you in time then?” He was frowning. The idea bothered him.

She smiled. “No. But you found me. That’s all that mattered. You found me. Nobody would be left wondering where I went.” She gave him a kiss on the cheek. “You threw me a very nice funeral by the way.”

“Yeah?” He perked up. “You know Bones. Maybe we should go visit Gordon Gordon tonight.”

“I don’t need a shrink.”

“I know, but maybe he’ll have some idea of how to get rid of the nightmare.” He wrapped his arm around her and started walking again. “It could start to effect your job performance you know.”

Her eyes widened. “Perhaps it would be a good idea, not that I believe in that psycho-babble.”

“Of course not.” Booth glanced at her knowingly.

“Booth?” She slid her hand into his back pocket.

“Yeah?”

“Thanks for bringing me here. We should bring Parker some time.”

“Sure Bones. You’ve got your hand on my butt by the way.”

She felt him up a little. “I know. It’s quite enjoyable.”
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Post by THX1138 Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:02 am

“Sure Bones. You’ve got your hand on my butt by the way.”

She felt him up a little. “I know. It’s quite enjoyable.”
Seriously, you write the best dialog! That had me rolling, again. I swer they're going to put me in the nut house at this rate. Too funny.


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Post by Karaoke_Junkie Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:32 am

Great story so far!! I can't wait to read more!
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Post by dawnsfire Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:53 am

Ah, to feel up Booth... Very Happy

Interesting how the nightmare changes--or does it simply get to go a little further? Like she's seeing more of a movie before she wakes?

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Post by TempestJo Fri Dec 11, 2009 1:51 am

"Booth?"

"Yeah Bones?" He smiled down at her, squeezing her hand in his own.

She leaned against him, smiling up into his face. "This is our third date right?"

He felt his blood redirect. "Uh huh.."

She pressed her lips into his neck.

He drew in a strangled breath and cleared his throat, stepping back. "Bones. There are children around!"

She grinned. "So maybe we should go somewhere more private?"

"But we haven't gone on the granddaddy of all roller coasters yet." He replied half heartedly.

She ran her hand along his belt, stopping at his belt buckle.

"Ok, yeah. Let's go." He grabbed her hand and pulled her through the park towards the SUV.

Brennan smirked. She totally won. Ok, so maybe they'd officially waited three dates. But he was caving first.

All of a sudden she was pressed up against the SUV, his hand in her hair, the other on her butt, his tongue in her mouth, making her delirious as her body instantly heated.

She curled her fingers into his hair.

He chuckled and moved his hand up her shirt, his thumb sliding inside her bra to rub against her.

Her legs felt like rubber. She pressed her hips against his, feeling his excitement, and the only thought in her head was that she wanted him, here, now, and she'd beg if she had to.

He opened the passenger door and pushed her inside, shutting it as soon as she was sitting on the seat.

Their eyes clung through the glass, and he smiled at her dazed expression. She thought she'd won.

He wasn't done yet, as he'd just proven.

He walked around the SUV and got in the drivers side, buckling his seatbelt and fiddling with the air conditioning before turning the vehicle on and driving out onto the road.

"So. My place or yours?" His asked casually.

She gritted her teeth. "Yours."

"Sure. So are we going to see Gordon Gordon later?" His hand caressed her knee, sending tingles up her leg.

"How about tomorrow?" She gasped.

"Why tomorrow?" He checked his rearview mirror, pulling into the pull off lane.

"Because maybe I won't have the nightmare tonight, and then I won't have to go at all." She replied, biting her lip as he continued to stroke her leg with his long fingers.

He just raised his eyebrows and turned onto the exit that led to his place.

She gathered her wits and slid her arm across the center console separating them, putting her hand on his lap.

The SUV swerved. "Bones!"

She moved her hand slowly.

"Bones, this is a federal vehicle... OH. Jeez Bones. You can't do.... that. I'll get in trouble. I'll lose my job... I'll..."

She squeezed gently, and he hit the horn and stepped on the gas simultaneously, his jaw dropping open. "BONES."

"Maybe we should turn the siren on?" She asked politely.

"Can't. That would be abuse of ....."

She moved her hand some more.

"I'm going to hell. I'm going straight to hell!" He said, flipping the siren and lights on.

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He had her shirt undone before they even got the apartment door unlocked.

His mouth was everywhere, teasing, tantalizing.

She pushed his shirt over his head and sucked on his collarbone, her hands on his belt buckle.

"Oh god Bones, are you sure?" He whispered against her neck, as he tugged her slacks down.

"I was sure four years ago Booth." She groaned, finally getting his belt opened, her hands now on his zipper.

He kissed her thoroughly. "I guess we've got a lot of time to make up for." He picked her up and carried her down the hall to his room.

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She stretched out beside him, running her eyes down his naked torso appreciatively.

He ran his hand over her hip. "You're beautiful. So beautiful. You should never wear clothes."

She laughed. "That would be highly unpractical if I were the only one to be naked."

"Hmm, yes. I'd have to shoot a lot more people wouldn't I." He muttered, his eyes glinting mischievously.

She ran her hand up his thigh.

He laughed and pulled her against him. "Ready for round two?"

"Say it again Booth."

"Say what?" He played dumb.

She pinched him.

"I love you Bones."

She pressed her lips to his and straddled him. "You were correct in your hypothesis. Making love is far superior to having plain old sex."

"I love it when you admit I'm right." He grinned, placing his hands on her hips.

She leaned forward, pressing her lips to his ear.

"I love you."

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Angela was waiting in her office on Monday morning with two cups of coffee when Brennan walked in.

"Sweetie.."

"Angela, good morning."

"Sweetie...."

Brennan sat in her chair and turned her computer on, taking a sip of her coffee. "MM. Thanks Ange, I needed that."

"You ARE going to tell me why you weren't home all weekend, and why you look positively LOVED this morning. Don't try to weasel out of it." Angela warned with a determined smile.

Brennan shrugged. "I was at Booth's."

Angela leaned forward. " I know. And?????"

"And what?"

"BREN."

She grinned. "And it was a tie, but I definitely won. Several times."

Angela clapped her hands and giggled. "Excellent! Was he as good as I said he'd be?"

Brennan leaned forward, dying to tell her best friend at least this much.. "Better."

Angela let out a tiny squeal. "I'm so happy for you!"

There was a cough at the doorway. "Morning Angela."

Angela jumped up. "Booth! I must say, you look very relaxed today." She grinned at him knowingly.

"I am. Thank you." He smirked. " Bones, let's go. We've got a case." He smiled at her. "Bring Hodgins, he's gonna love this."

Brennan stood up, grabbing her coffee to take with her. "See you later Angela."

Angela smiled and waved, giving Booth a saucy wink. "I totally knew. I totally knew! Damn, I'm good."

Booth looked at her curiously as she headed for the door. "Knew what?"

Angela walked out. "That you'd be a magic man. I'll go tell Hodgins to grab your field kit Bren."

Booth rolled his eyes and held out his hand to Brennan. "Ready to get to work?"

"Of course. As long as we get to play later."

"Did you just make a joke?"

Brennan nodded. "A reference to a popular quote."

"It was funny."

"Thank you."

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Ok, thats it for this one! Due to the onset of OMG-it's-almost-xmas-and-I-havn't-baked-or-bought-a-thing itis.
Thanks for reading and commenting! I hope you enjoyed it!
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Post by THX1138 Fri Dec 11, 2009 4:18 am

I loved it, every word. Your gift for dialog, the manner in which you play them off one another, is very reminscent of blc's lighter works. And as always there's something that catches my fancy and wont' let go:

"Maybe we should turn the siren on?" She asked politely.

"Can't. That would be abuse of ....."

She moved her hand some more.

"I'm going to hell. I'm going straight to hell!" He said, flipping the siren and lights on.

Simply fantastic! I can't wait for your next fic. I'm putting you on author alert at FF!

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Post by TempestJo Wed Feb 03, 2010 11:27 am

Having troubles at FF. How irritating. The one day I have time to upload buckloads of writing, and the uploader is busted. Going to Post some here too.
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Post by booth fan Mon Mar 29, 2010 2:22 pm

cute story I love the B&B interaction!
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