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A Boy From Philly (Rated M, friendship, fluff, angst)

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Post by Cassiopeia Mon Jan 26, 2009 5:08 am

You have ... done a lot. I am still loving your stories. As you know. Sorry, I haven't reviewd your chaps in between, but I have kept an eye on them Smile So...
I love every bit of your story. It is different, and that is what makes it better. I really love your POV-s and your style of writing Wink

Oh Smile Keep on going. Half of the ABY is already waiting for your new stories Smile
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Post by sweetie_dude Mon Jan 26, 2009 7:19 am

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Post by ForensicMama Mon Jan 26, 2009 7:33 am

Thanks guys!!! Very Happy

No epilogue. That was it.

I wasn't planning on writing another story for a while, but geez, I must've impressed b/c there are a lot of people looking forward to the next... so maybe I'll start brain storming.
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Post by sweetie_dude Mon Jan 26, 2009 12:00 pm

lol. you know we all love your stories mama Smile
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Post by CanadianBones Mon Jan 26, 2009 12:31 pm

that was a great story, very sweet. lol at the baby's middle name.
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Post by ForensicMama Tue Jan 27, 2009 2:40 am

Thanks! Very Happy

I figured they'd give the kid a strange name... Especially considering that it's hard for them to agree on some things hahaha.
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Post by a380fan Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:09 am

I found this late so I wasn't able to comment with each chapter, but, uhm... how do you say, FREAKING AMAZING!

Awesome job. The characterization was very good with few exceptions. Technically accurate (as far as I know, though the Korean war predated the Vietnam war by nearly two decades.) And just very good general writing. Detailed without being verbose and... just awesome.

Great job and write more ASAP, mmmm'kaaaaayyyyy?
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Post by ForensicMama Fri Jan 30, 2009 4:51 am

Thank you, a380fan!!!

I'll have to go check that out. I will have to read back on that chapter... probably all of them hahahaha.... and then fix that if it needs fixin'. I hate leaving mistakes just hanging hehehe. Wink
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