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Post by dawnsfire Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:59 pm

Some of you may have seen this referenced over on FF.net, which is where I found it (I think it originated on LJ)--the 10 song/iPod Shuffle challenge. Basically, hit shuffle on your playlist, and write a drabble for each of the 1st 10 songs that come up. The catch is that you stop writing the drabble when the music stops. Trust me, that part's harder than it sounds...and it just about killed me not to polish beyond spelling when I was all done.

Santiago by Loreena McKennitt
Maxwell’s Silver Hammer by the Beatles
Caribbean Blue by Enya
Sugar Walls by Sheena Easton
Cruel Summer by Bananarama
How Can I Live Without Her? from The Pirate Movie
Let the River Run by Carly Simon
Russians by Sting
Willkommen from Cabaret
Winter by Tori Amos

T for one section. Cross-posted--and almost forgot--I don't own the rights to the characters or the songs. Sad

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Santiago

Brennan listened to the music, wondering what Booth would think if he came in and caught her practicing. She had shared many of her accomplishments over their partnership, but the belly-dancing had never come up. But it was good exercise and fun, too.

She lightly hummed along with the music as she swung her hips, matching the rhythm. Not a traditional piece for what she was doing, but it had the right feel and gave scope for some embellishments. And she gave it her all, completely caught up in the ebb and flow, the drums and flutes.

So caught up, in fact, that she never heard the knock on the door nor it opening. Only when the music stopped did she see her partner leaning against the wall, eyes wide and a huge smile on his mouth.


Maxwell’s Silver Hammer

Maxwell lurked over his test tubes, watching the leading ladies of the Medico-Legal Lab. Oh, how he wished he could get just one of them alone. Just for a minute, he thought, fingering the silver pendent his mother had given him before he left for DC. Just one minute, and then they’d be his, all his, forever…

But there was a noise behind him and he jumped, knocking over at least one beaker. It was Agent Booth, the one person who truly kept him from what he desired. He was simply going to have to settle for lesser lights. But they weren’t going to be looking for him, not with all those testimonials he had been able to present when hired.

(ahem--obviously not Max Keenan)


Caribbean Blue

“I don’t want to be here,” Booth said sourly.

“Too bad,” Brennan replied coolly. “You insisted on tagging along, and this is where I was going.”

He looked out at the intensely blue water. Admittedly, the last time he had been here in the Caribbean, it hadn’t been for pleasure. Gitmo was not a vacation spot.

He turned and looked up at the towering walls of El Morro, pretending to be a tourist until there was a familiar and cheerful voice behind him.

“Tempe! Booth!”

“Sully,” he said, forcing his voice to calm as he turned to face Brennan’s old boyfriend.


Sugar Walls

Brennan looked at her partner sprawled out in her bed next to her. After more than five years of being partners, then friends, then something she didn’t actually have words for that encompassed both, they had finally done it. Fallen in bed together, frantically kissing and tasting each other as though the other was about to disappear; he had murmured things about sugar and honey, but she didn’t question it, too lost in the sensations he provoked. And then, they had made love all night--he had barely left her and she had been equally reluctant to let him slide out of her.

Her eyes sparkled in the early morning light. Oh, she very much wanted to do that again.


Cruel Summer

DC was experiencing a heat wave and part of Booth was glad he was inside for the most part. Still on medical leave and unable to pick up his life as it had been was driving him insane. But the worst part of it was that Bren--Bones, he corrected himself firmly. He knew who she was, really he did, but when his mind wandered like that, the other name slid in.

The worst thing was that she wasn’t there. She’d taken off as soon as the doctor said something about him recovering, and Booth missed her like nobody else. He worried about her, off in Guatemala; it was dangerous there.

Not that you were guaranteed health and safety here, either. The irony of Pops having surgery at the same time was not lost on him.


Russians

Seeley crouched low in the gap between his bed and the wall, listening to his parents fight. Or rather, his father yelling. He had sacrificed some of his comics, letting Jared read them, so that he wouldn’t go downstairs and get smacked. Now, his little brother was contentedly paging through Seeley’s favorite Green Lantern, right in the very corner.

Finally, the door slammed and the car’s engine gunned and he knew his dad was safely gone. Soft footsteps climbed the stairs and when the door opened, he peeked over the bed to see his mother enter with a pained smile.


How can I live without her?

He watched her walk away, in complete shock how it had all ended. Brutally fast and over something that six months ago neither of them would have ever questioned. A year and a half gone, just like that.

That night, he sank back in the deepest recliner he had, flipped on some numbing TV, and opened the first of many beers, and drank himself into oblivion.

It didn’t help that when he woke, the first thing he saw was a picture of her from their faux honeymoon after the wedding that wasn’t.


Let the River Run

When had he noticed how her eyes changed? Originally, he had noted them as mostly blue, along with her other basic stats, just as he did with everyone. But somewhere along the line, he realized they really weren’t blue. Not the way people usually defined blue eyes. No, they were actually more often grey. Once in a while green. A romantic at heart, he decided on aquamarine finally and started paying attention to the changes. Bluish-grey was their usual color, but the blue deepened with some deeper emotions; in fact, they shifted to a clear blue when he complimented her and he wanted to see that more often.


Willkommen

“What in Hell is she saying?” Booth hissed.

“Beats me,” Angela said with a shrug, sipping her drink as though nothing was wrong. Booth had to admire her composure and took a large swig of his beer to cover his own discomfort.

Another torrent of words spilled from Brennan’s mouth. German, he thought, or Russian. Too choppy to be Spanish or French.

An hand slid up his arm in what he knew was meant to be a seductive gesture. “American, yes?” the accented voice asked. “So--handsome,” she laughed. “You help wit’ my English? I am a very cun-ning linguist.”

Angela choked, but Booth turned to look at the woman. Pretty enough, he supposed, heavily made-up, as might be expected, and a view that rivaled the Alps if he looked down. He shook his head, and jerked his head towards Brennan who was now listening to whatever the bartender was saying. “Sorry. Taken.”

She pouted, then looked at Angela, who grinned. “You tempt me, but no.”


Winter

“Tempe! Come back here,” Christine Brennan hollered as her daughter ran outside into the new snow. “Oh, that girl,” she sighed, slapping the mittens against her thigh. “She’s going to freeze.”

Matthew chuckled behind her. “I’ll get her. Or at least get her to put these on,” he added, taking them from his wife. “And yes, button up, too. But relax, Chris--it’s the first snow of the year.”

Christine smiled at that. It was good to see her so-serious daughter let go. “Take them and be gone, then. Otherwise, you’re nursing her through her first cold.”

“That’s not what causes a cold and you know it,” he laughed before taking off after Tempe.

A snowball thrown with wicked aim landed on his chest and he looked up to see her, eyes a blue to match the winter sky dancing.

“Button up,” he called to her, hoping she would never change.

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Post by DBCrazy Thu Dec 17, 2009 12:05 am

Dawn, you wrote each of those in the space of a song?? Amazing! That sounds like some sort of writer's block trick or something. You came up with some really nice bits! You really ran the gambit of emotion too ... fear and joy, love and loss, lust and longing!!

Loved the belly dancing! Last summer Emily was asked in an interview where she'd like to go if they made another on-location shoot. She mentioned Egypt and at the time I thought they might be able to incorporate belly dancing in that somehow! I can see Brennan belly dancing, even if she has to tell herself it's for its true anthropological reasons.
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Post by THX1138 Thu Dec 17, 2009 3:21 am

My Queen this was simply amazing, especially given the constraints placed upon your writing. I don't think I could ever have done something like this to begin with and to have done it as well as you have is impressive.

The high lights for me were:

Santiago - This just tickled me because I can totally see Brennan taking a Belly Dancing class for it's anthropological value and then getting into it because it's fun. Of course Booth will be enjoying that fantasy for a long, long time.

Willkommen is just so funny and spot on, it's like the literary equivalent of a Norman Rockwell painting - I can "see" the overdone Fräulein hitting on Booth, oblivious to his disinterest while he watches Brennan intently and Angela takes it all in.

Winter was a lovely slice of baby Brennan. I do have a soft spot for childhood Brennan, and writing Max is easy enough (IMO) for most to capture but writing Christine is always a challenge, and yet I think you do her justice.

Amazing my Queen, simply amazing.

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Post by Laffers18 Thu Dec 17, 2009 7:15 am

You wrote them all......in the time of a song.........man you are GOOD!!!!!!

Brilliant!
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Post by dawnsfire Thu Dec 17, 2009 3:41 pm

I'm blushing! Embarassed It was a great writers' exercise, and frankly I'm just pleased it came out well enough to be posted.

True enough that Brennan would learn things for the sake of her beloved anthropology--but when she sticks with them? Ah! And actually, Sherry, now that you mention Egypt (which she does have a fondness for, after all), I can see her dropping some comment about learning to dance the way she mentioned learning to walk the high wire. And then proving it. Wink But somebody else can write that one!

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Post by DBCrazy Thu Dec 17, 2009 3:49 pm

Blush away! You did a great job!! As a matter of fact, don't be shy to pick any of them to expound on.

As for trying to pawn that dancing off on someone else ... no, no, no! You started it, now you have to finish it!! *claps excitedly*

(I do have a little bit of history on it that I dug up, back when I thought I might do something with it. You know, one of the primary objectives with belly dancing, in its origins, was to prepare the female body for the rigors of carrying and bearing children! Very Happy )
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