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Post by Kajunblueyes Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:38 am

PPS!!!
~~~~~~Cassie~~~~~~~~~
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Post by Kajunblueyes Tue Dec 16, 2008 12:04 pm

PPS! I love this story! *sitting onpins and needles here*
~~~~~~Cassie~~~~~~~
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Post by Shakari Tue Dec 16, 2008 1:10 pm

Yeah, me too! Please, oh please post soon! I'm running out of bunnies!
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Post by ToZiKa Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:20 am

flyersfan35 wrote:Thanks all! Glad you liked it, and the next chapter should be up soon...hopefully...

is it soon yet?

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Post by flyersfan35 Thu Dec 18, 2008 8:18 am

ToZiKa wrote:
flyersfan35 wrote:Thanks all! Glad you liked it, and the next chapter should be up soon...hopefully...

is it soon yet?
'Soon' is such a relative term...lol. *sigh* I'm working on it, I promise...
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Post by ToZiKa Thu Dec 18, 2008 6:37 pm

flyersfan35 wrote:
ToZiKa wrote:
flyersfan35 wrote:Thanks all! Glad you liked it, and the next chapter should be up soon...hopefully...

is it soon yet?
'Soon' is such a relative term...lol. *sigh* I'm working on it, I promise...

hurry up! Twisted Evil

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Post by Kajunblueyes Sat Dec 20, 2008 1:07 pm

yeah I am with Toz...........hurry up, we would hate to form an angry mob lol..........*evil laugh* Evil or Very Mad
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Post by ToZiKa Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:32 am

maybe we would hat it.....but we would do it non the less..... Twisted Evil

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Post by Kajunblueyes Mon Dec 22, 2008 1:24 pm

hmm............any signers on the mob? I am so definatly in......I'll bring the pitchforks and the torches............muhahahahahaha Evil or Very Mad
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Post by Kajunblueyes Mon Dec 22, 2008 1:26 pm

how are you Toz? It's good to know that you have my back on this one lol. You made me smile. in case I don't talk to you until after the holidays, have a very blessed one! santa
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Post by ToZiKa Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:28 am

thank you kajunblueyes (btw did you miss an "e"?)
I'm always in when we have to form a good old mob.....
but I guess fly will write a new chapter sooner or later....she promised me a chapter soon.....so I hope we won't have to wait so much longer

have a merry christmas!

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Post by queen bess Tue Dec 23, 2008 9:08 am

ok... lovely new chapter... that;s not so new... more please!!!!!!!!!!!! you cannot leave them in there! that is mean and cruel and all sorts of other adjectives that i can't think of right now...

MORE SOON!!! or i'll stop being polite...
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Post by flyersfan35 Tue Dec 23, 2008 9:45 am

Okay, okay. I'm writing it, I swear! Hopefully I will have something up by Christmas...
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Post by Shakari Thu Dec 25, 2008 9:57 am

(evil smile) ....eeeeexxcellent.....

I'm glad, 'cause I'm almost outta inspiration bunnies to give away. Very Happy

Happy happy holidays!!! <33
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Post by flyersfan35 Thu Dec 25, 2008 11:48 am

Okay...not by Christmas, but I swear on Booth's body it will be done by Saturday.
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Post by Shakari Thu Dec 25, 2008 3:19 pm

That's a pretty serious swear, my friend. XD Don't feel too pressured, though. Enjoy your holiday. Very Happy
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Post by ToZiKa Thu Dec 25, 2008 8:07 pm

it's okay fly.....no need to endanger Booth's body now....we believe you....

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Post by A2BOREANAZ Fri Dec 26, 2008 4:52 am

*a2b backs in truckload of year old tuna casserole left over from former mobbings*...do you really want me to dump this next to your house?????? really.....do you?????????? okay then.......if you arent going to write the next chapter.......thats what i will have to do............*a2b starts to pull lever to dump*
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Post by Shakari Fri Dec 26, 2008 4:56 am

OMG not the tuna casserole! Noooooooooo!!! I can't watch! *covers eyes*

All of the cats in a 100 mile radius will be unable to resist the smell! They'll all migrate onto your property...XD I'm a cat person, but seriously, Fly, this looks bad.
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Post by fairytales_end Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:40 pm

Wow. Newly addicted...post sooooooon ...please Surprised
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Post by Aloemilk Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:59 pm

Yep, the mob's here. Just as Kas said.
And sorry, but Booth won't be threatening any of us, because he's in our side. You swore over his body, after all!!!!

And you should really, really stop saying your writing's not good. Because if you're being honest, you're very much wrong. And if it's just a tactic so one will start reading thinking it won't be good to then be surprised, it'd be mean.
And you're not mean, right, fly?
I do belive you're not mean **says in my most soft-and-scary voice.**. And that's why you'r going to post tonight that chap you've said is almost ready, right?
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Post by flyersfan35 Sun Dec 28, 2008 3:07 pm

Okay, for better or worse, here is the next chapter. I’m not exactly sure how I feel about it…and I know it’s really short, but it’s where my muse insisted I stop.

Thanks to fluff for the help with the quote, and thanks to all who are reading and reviewing. And I know I promised this on Saturday, but technically, it’s still Saturday in California…


The squints sat in the diner just down the street from the federal building, not saying much. Hodgins had insisted that they order food, but none of them had eaten much. The hours dragged on, and still no word about Booth or Brennan.

“I can’t just sit around here and do nothing.” Angela’s voice broke the silence. She stood and looked down at the others. “We have to do something.”

“Angela, there’s nothing we can do.”

“But…it can’t be. Brennan has to be okay, she just has to be…” The tears that she had held at bay all afternoon finally started to fall.

Hodgins stood and pulled her into his arms. “Shh, it’s gonna be okay…”

Sweets, for once, had had nothing to offer, and had been abnormally quiet throughout the day. Cam had been hoping for some reassuring words from him, but so far, they hadn’t been forthcoming. She watched for a moment as Hodgins comforted Angela, then once again pulled out her cell phone. Opening it, she pressed the speed dial, praying that this time, he’d answer…

xxx

Another hour had passed with Booth talking about anything and everything, trying to keep Brennan’s mind off their situation. So far, he had been through his childhood, his war years, Parker... He was careful to only mention the good moments; they had enough of their own despair right here, he didn’t need to add to it.

It had gradually gotten darker until he couldn’t even see her lying on the ground beside him. He could still occasionally hear shouts and noises, and he knew they were looking for survivors, which gave him hope, though he knew if they didn’t find them soon, Brennan may not make it… No. He shook away the thoughts. He wasn’t going to lose her.

“Booth?”

Her weak voice pulled him out of his musings, and he turned to her. “Sorry Bones.” He managed a smile, though she couldn’t see it. “My mind wandered there for a bit.”

“I’m so tired,” she whispered.

Panic flared up in him at her words. “Come on, Temperance.” He squeezed her hand. “Just stay with me a little while longer.”

“I can’t…”

“Damn it, Temperance, you can’t give up on me! I won’t let you.” She didn’t respond, and he went on. “You and Parker are the only things in this world that matter to me, and I’m not letting you go. You made it out alive when the gravedigger trapped you and Hodgins, and you’re going to make it out of here.”

“That was…different. I…”

“It’s no different. You were trapped, and you fought your way out, and it’s the same thing now.” His voice turned pleading. “I need you, Temperance. We’re a team, remember? You give the victims a face, a voice, and I arrest the bad guys. I can’t do it without you.”

“Yes you can.”

“What, with all those ridiculous interns?” Booth scoffed. “No way. All of them together wouldn’t equal you.”

“Booth? I’m afraid…”

“You have to fight, Temperance. You have to live.”

“Why?”

“Because, I can’t live without you.” The stark admission seemed to echo in the cramped space. He paused for a few seconds, then took a deep breath. He’d gone this far, he might as well go all the way. “Every morning I wake up, and I can’t wait to see you, and you’re the last person I want to talk to at night. You and me, we’re more than partners; more than friends. I love you, Temperance, and you are not going to die on me. I won’t let you.”

Booth felt a slight pressure on his hand, but she didn’t respond. “Temperance?” His heart seemed to stop in his chest when she still didn’t answer. Alarmed, he raised his hand to her throat, even as he peered through the darkness to see her face. “Temperance?!” Near panic now, he was just about to reach for her when two things happened simultaneously. His cell phone rang, and he heard voices calling to him in the darkness.
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Post by flyersfan35 Sun Dec 28, 2008 3:09 pm

And loe, I didn't say that my writing's not good, I just don't really care for this particular fic. I think some of my other ones are much better. But I will try to stop being so negative, okay? lol
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Post by fairytales_end Sun Dec 28, 2008 3:15 pm

nooooooooo! don't stop thereee! you cant! its soo cruel!
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Post by Aloemilk Sun Dec 28, 2008 3:17 pm

flyersfan35 wrote:And loe, I didn't say that my writing's not good, I just don't really care for this particular fic. I think some of my other ones are much better. But I will try to stop being so negative, okay? lol

You better do.
I remember you saying bad things about your own writing Mad Mad I'd look it up and quote, but it'd take too much time, lol.
I'll rest fine if you just accept you're good Smile

And geez, this was a good shortie! I hope she heard him...
Good thing they're getting to them.

Feeling inspired again? Very Happy
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